I do like it, overall. It's just that the eye being the empty space in the e/r is somewhat disconcerting. I don't know, maybe it's just me.
It sounds like a good tart, I'm just not 100% sure what it has to do with Robespierre. XD
I should have taken physics in secondary school. I would have too, except it had this impossible engineering project... It's a pity; if they just could have had a basic version, I would have been fine.